Sick sentence:

Sam and the skydivers held on to each other They were high up It was scary.

Sam and the confident clam skydivers keep good grip of one and each other.  Like there is no tomorrow there feet no where near the damp ruff grouchy grass. My heart was pounding at a thousand miles and hour. There was no turning back.

Sick sentence:

It was really stormy

 My eyes glare at the rerouting raging sky my heart drops as another crashing angry wave flies past me.

sick sentence:

The sea was rough and there was big waves

waves are rising  higher and higher as each second flies  past the enormous waves reaches up screams of terria.