I am trying to make my writing more exciting for the reader by varying ny sentence beginnings and using descriptive language.

100 word story-THE STARVING CROCODILE

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THE STARVING CROCODILE

Viciously I paddle down the orange thick gooey swamp,my hands lose grip of the paddle.Slowly I turn to my right my heart Collapse,I can not belive what I am seeing

Within this swamp an extremely wide,starving crocodile do I move? Do I stay here and let it stear me down?.Really slow I grip the paddle and slowly paddle away,the massive crocodile carefully sinks down back into the thick water like a sinking submarine.I can finally breath uhh (slowly sigh).